I thought it was good. At least, people think it's good for a first timer, but do bear in mind, it's going down the historical line. How could it be judged as 'good for a first timer'?! It's got to be really good.
To me, I think it's pretty acceptable. Nothing wrong that I could spot, but I do admit that there are extra elements that can be added into it, for my lack of experience in that certain essence, but that wouldn't bother the current quality.
I'm currently lost of trust. Where am I? Straying in midst of the busy world, searching for a branch to cling on. I need a genuine one. I really really need you.
Sometimes there are things that I tell myself I could only do with your presence here. But in reality, I always can without you.
"You told me there's no mistakes, it's just all it takes"